Out in the Dark

by Ridansh C.
(Gurgaon,India)

Star Star, it shines so bright.
This little star is gonna be mine.
Clouds are in different shapes, sometimes like a circle or a line.
Today I see a half moon and it’s gonna change soon.
Oh, the sun has what heat and I sure don’t like meat.
Yesterday was so windy and I love Hindi.
Oh, I love rain and India is the main.

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Jul 04, 2023
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by: Rashmi Agrawal

Wow. Good Ridansh

Jun 29, 2023
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by: Anonymous

This is Super! I admire your intelligence and writing Ridu!
Keep it up👍♥️

Deepa Kumar

Jun 29, 2023
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Welldone!!! Great effort...keep up the good work!

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by: Smriti

Great job, Ridansh!! Really enjoyed reading your poem.

Jun 29, 2023
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Good job Ridu… keep it up

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Great going kiddo, very well written.

Jun 28, 2023
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by: Rashmi Bhatia

Beautiful Poem Ridansh. Keep shining always

Jun 28, 2023
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Beautiful Poem Ridhansh...great going kiddo

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AMAZING POEM MY RIDHU MY SWEET HEART ❤️😊❤️

Jun 28, 2023
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Beautifully written. Very well done Ridansh 👏

Jun 28, 2023
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by: Paridhi

Lovely poem! Loved it. Well done and keep it up ❤️

Jun 28, 2023
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Well done👏🏻👏🏻

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by: Preeti

Little poet, you rock. Very nice poem.

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by: Sunil

Nice feel

Jun 28, 2023
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Very nice NEW
by: Anonymous

What a wonderful tribute poem. Please keep on writing.

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by: Udayveer

Amazing poem Ridu
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Good Job Ridansh

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Beautiful poem

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very nice poem NEW
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Very nice poem !!!

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Beautiful poem

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Beautiful poem

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Out in the Dark
by: Denise

This is a combination of a rhyming poem and free form thinking. Thanks for sharing and keep on writing!

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