Our Heavenly Village

by Aarna P.
(Gurgaon, India )


The glorious sunshine brightens up my day,
The pine trees invite me for a joyful play,
The sparrows are building a gorgeous nest,
The villagers are waking up from rest,
I’m delighted to traverse through this beautiful day,
Where the cows moo and the horses neigh.

The village boys are ploughing the fields,
Anticipating what their hard work yields,
A group of ducks swim in the lake,
Along with the fish and the water snake,
With flying ponytails, the girls run around,
Their laughter echoes a musical sound.

Our village ground is where we gather,
Play, work, and see dreams together,
The moist grass smells so divine,
Illuminated by the blazing sunshine,
The little ones roll on it for fun,
And, then get up quickly to run.

Grannies sing and walk along,
Stopping and grooving to a beautiful song,
Grandpas sow seeds in a line,
Creating a breathtaking design,
Children bicycle around the lake,
Enjoying their amazingly playful break.

Our village is immersed in the beauty of nature,
Working tirelessly to create a prosperous future,
A beacon of light for the world to see,
That healthy and happy is the way to be,
Where harmony and peace is carefully observed,
And, nature and the environment are earnestly preserved.

Comments for Our Heavenly Village

Average Rating starstarstarstarstar

Click here to add your own comments

Oct 11, 2023
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
A stand out poem NEW
by: Anonymous

The scene comes alive in your beautiful description. We need more young writers like you to write about the environment. Keep writing!

-Archana

Oct 06, 2023
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
Lovely NEW
by: Viraj

Very creative.keep writing

Oct 06, 2023
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
Nostalgia NEW
by: Anonymous

Shaaabaashhhh Shaandaar Jabasdasst

Oct 06, 2023
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
Beautiful NEW
by: Vibha

You have such a way with words, its a gift!
Your thoughts flow beautifully. Its such a pleasure to read.

Oct 06, 2023
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
Creative NEW
by: kunalsandm@gmail.com

Amazing writing , keep it up. You are the future of india and very inspirational for youngsters 🥰

Oct 06, 2023
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
Well done NEW
by: Anonymous

Aarna you have come a long way . More power to you and keep writing and inspiring.

Oct 05, 2023
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
Beaitiful; Our Heavenly Village NEW
by: Anonymous

Thank you Aarna for taking me to back to nature. Thvillage, Hills, Nature has been always closest to my heart. Reading your poem I could literally feel I'm standing there. You have picked all those ssmall elements of nature and described them so simply in your poem that anyone reading this piece will time travel thay very momebt to the village from wherever he/she is.
Thanks again for writing this. Keep writing with simplicity and touching millions of hearts. God Bless Always 🙌

Oct 05, 2023
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
Commendable NEW
by: charulatanaithani@gmail.com

Excellent work Aarna❤️...keep writing💕

Oct 04, 2023
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
Loved it! NEW
by: Deepti

Very beautifully written! Keep writing and keep shining xo

Oct 04, 2023
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
Beautifully written
by: gitakapil@gmail.com

Great inspiration for young n aspiring poets. The beauty of Nature revealed insuch picturesque way that brings us close to the rustic life. The choice of words matches with the emotions.

Oct 04, 2023
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
Our Heavenly Village
by: Denise

Thank you, Aarna, for such an uplifting poem. You give us images of your village with rhythm and rhyme. Well done. Please keep on writing! - Denise

Click here to add your own comments

Join in and write your own page! It's easy to do. How? Simply click here to return to Publish Poems Here.