Last minute winner

by Yahya A.
(Huddersfield)

Yahya Ali Asghar 7 years old

Yahya Ali Asghar 7 years old

Last minute winner!

Crash smash slam wham!
Bang clash on the dash.
Long strong legs.
Tall ball on to score.
Blue shoes on the loose.

Crash, smash, on the dash!
Two yellows make a red.
Handball on to score.
Off the post and in.
Last minute winner!

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Jan 23, 2025
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starstarstarstarstar 		Great Use of Onomatopoeia!
by: Denise

Hi Yahya,
Whether you know it or not, you made great use of Onomatopoeia in your poem. Onomatopoeia is the use of words that sound like the sound they're describing. Like the word "crash."

This is a fun and fast-moving poem. You have an ear for poetry. Keep up the good work and keep on writing! - Denise

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