Chocolate cake

by Alina S.
(Lahore,pakistan)

My favorite food is chocolate cake
Its often always freshly baked

Its junk but its so much yummy
I like it when it goes in my tummy

Its of every kind
But always mine

Everybody likes the Chocolate cake
when i am the one to bake and make

I always take one yummy slice
It goes in my tummy its very nice

I never miss the chocolate cake
When its in my house all freshly baked

My favourite food is chocolate cake
Its often always freshly baked.
(By haya shahzad)

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Aug 21, 2023
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Great piece of work NEW
by: Anonymous

You wrote a great poem. If you were trying to rhyme you could have done better but apart from that it was awesome.

Jun 28, 2023
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Nice piece of work by H.S NEW
by: Anonymous

Absolutely loved your piece of work. We really enjoyed the poetry. Well done!:)

Jun 28, 2023
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Brilliant and Yummy Poem NEW
by: shahzadshahid@yahoo.com

A very brilliantly written poem. All the verses are really well balanced. It almost gives you a taste of chocolate cake when the reader reads it. Keep up the Good Work. Lovely Girl Haya.

Jun 28, 2023
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Excellent NEW
by: Anonymous

Dear haya!! My favorite desert is also chocolate cake 🎂.. In the last few years with the wink of an eye, you have turned into a very fine poetess MashAllah ..I am proud of you!

Jun 28, 2023
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Chocolate Cake!
by: Denise

Chocolate is a favorite food! Enjoy the rhymes and keep on writing!

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